Best Comment Award 4/17

I agree with Dulce and Paige that this is a great peice because of the fact you used descriptive writing. I also see that you used great vocabulary like climatic....i had no clue wat that ment until i read it in your writing. i also get mad when mr. commerson does not let us out on time.

I thought that this was the best comment because it illustrated how he felt about my piece. It also had his own opinion on the matter and something that he actually learned which I thought was cool. Thanks Lishane!